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Whether it's a first, ninth or final draft, send us your law school personal statement. You can also tell us if you'd like us to focus on a particular aspect e.g. word count or work experience 📮

Our experts will thoroughly read through your law personal statement and give you their own analysis of what you have done well and what you can improve on 👩🏽‍💻

After receiving our feedback, you should feel ready to improve your law personal statement. Feel free to send us another draft at this stage! 📝

After completing all the improvements, the hard part is over, and you can finally upload your law personal statement to UCAS. Ah - What a relief! 🥳

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Here at Law Mind, we're extremely meticulous and our team of law students will review every line of your law personal statement and ensure it meets our high standards.

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As well as line-by-line feedback for your law personal statement, we'll give you feedback on how you did in each of the key areas that law school admission teams are looking for.

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After reading our feedback, make the changes we've suggested and implement them. You're welcome to contact us anytime for further advice and also request another law personal statement check!

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Before your 1-1 session, your mentor will review your law personal statement and make some initial comments to make every minute count 📧

You get to speak to your mentor in real-time and allows you to go through your law personal statement with on-going feedback 👩🏽‍💻

After the session, you can continue to edit the law personal statement in your own time and message your mentor if you have further questions 📱

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Let’s work through an example..

Reducing word count

You could make this more concise by shortening the full paragraph (see example at end of document)

Work Experience

There's no link here between your MOOC and Work Experience - It needs to read more as a story here.

Spelling and Grammar

Your spelling and grammar up until this point has been perfect! Don't worry too much about using complex language.

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Extra-curriculars

It would be useful here to link this back to law and show why this is important to have as a lawyer.

Motivation for Law

This is a good start! However, you need to show how exactly this sparked your interest for law

Language Style

Good use of the active voice but just be careful that your sentences are not longer than 2 sentences.

How can we improve
your Personal Statement?

  1. Personal Analysis

    Rather than giving you some generic advice, we'll work through what you've written and give bespoke feedback.

  2. Reducing Word Count

    The 4,000 word limit can be hard to maintain, but we will make you more concise in your writing.

  3. Improving Language

    All our tutors are experienced teachers who have excelled in the exam and implement our proven strategies.

  4. Grammar Checking

    Universities will reject a law personal statement with poor grammar - we'll make sure you won't.

  5. Reviewed by Law Students

    Your law personal statement will be proofed by law students with insight into what universities are looking for.

  6. 1-to-1 Feedback Lessons

    You will be mentored throughout to ensure your law personal statement is up to scratch.

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Saavan

Jan 2020

I'm so thankful for the help Shameena gave! She managed to cut out 1,000 characters from my law personal statement! She also gave some great insights into how I could improve.

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Vikalesh

Jan 2020

Thanks to Law Mind's Personal Statement check I managed to get invited to 4 interviews! They were very quick in their turnaround, and were able to address the areas I needed to edit.

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Robyn

Jan 2020

I was surprised by how detailed Law Mind were in their feedback - they noticed things my head of sixth form didn’t. I liked the fact that I could Skype the tutor and discuss the edits through with her.

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Zhao

July 2019

I had my law personal statement reviewed 4 times by Law Mind and they went above and beyond what I expected! They are a group of enthusiastic and professional teachers!

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Xheng

October 2019

The feedback they gave was very constructive and helped me cut down words. They took extra care to make sure I understood the feedback they were giving, and implement it effectively.

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Khadijah

September 2018

I would highly recommend the Law Mind law personal statement review. They made sure they didn't just rewrite my personal statement but instead gave some real individual feedback!

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Ethan

August 2017

I could not recommend this website more! I bought a law personal statement check from many companies but theirs was the best. They also responded within 24h before my UCAS deadline

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Prabjhot

August 2019

I had a two hour 1-1 session with Alice who was so helpful in cutting down my Law personal statement. She helped me with my surgical work experience paragraph, which had a few lengthy sentences.

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Jennifer

September 2019

The Law personal statement check happened so quickly - I got it back instantly. I have no complaints at all! Speed was good - I got it back within 2 days. The analysis was detailed and clear to me.

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Joy

August 2019

At first I was reluctant as I was skeptical that it was cheaper than most providers. However, I was very happy! My editor, Shameena, spotted grammar mistakes and helped me cut my word count

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Duncan

July 2019

If it wasn't for Law Mind, I would never have known how to write a law personal statement so well. They helped teach me how to make links between my work experience and my skills.

Our packages

All our packages come with feedback on grammar, structure and content. Your personal statement will be reviewed by a current law student. Rest assured, whichever package you purchase you are guaranteed your law personal statement back within 48 hours or your money back.

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Access all of our courses.

  • 2 Personal Statement Checks
  • Access one of our courses.
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  • 7 Day Follow Up
  • Real-Time Feedback
  • Personal WhatsApp Group
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Our proven
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Send us your law personal statement 📮

Whether it’s a first, ninth or final draft, send us your personal statement. You can also tell us if you’d like us to focus on a particular aspect e.g. word count or work experience

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Analyse

We’ll analyse your law personal statement 👩🏽‍💻

Our experts will thoroughly read through your medicine personal statement and give you their own analysis of what you have done well and what you can improve on

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Improve

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After receiving our feedback, you should feel ready to improve your medicine personal statement. Feel free to send us another draft at this stage!

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Submit

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After completing all the improvements, the hard part is over, and you can finally upload your medicine personal statement to UCAS. Ah – What a relief!

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