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Whether it's a first, ninth or final draft, send us your law school personal statement. You can also tell us if you'd like us to focus on a particular aspect e.g. word count or work experience 📮
Our experts will thoroughly read through your law personal statement and give you their own analysis of what you have done well and what you can improve on 👩🏽💻
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You could make this more concise by shortening the full paragraph (see example at end of document)
There's no link here between your MOOC and Work Experience - It needs to read more as a story here.
Your spelling and grammar up until this point has been perfect! Don't worry too much about using complex language.
It would be useful here to link this back to law and show why this is important to have as a lawyer.
This is a good start! However, you need to show how exactly this sparked your interest for law
Good use of the active voice but just be careful that your sentences are not longer than 2 sentences.
Rather than giving you some generic advice, we'll work through what you've written and give bespoke feedback.
The 4,000 word limit can be hard to maintain, but we will make you more concise in your writing.
All our tutors are experienced teachers who have excelled in the exam and implement our proven strategies.
Universities will reject a law personal statement with poor grammar - we'll make sure you won't.
Your law personal statement will be proofed by law students with insight into what universities are looking for.
You will be mentored throughout to ensure your law personal statement is up to scratch.
I'm so thankful for the help Shameena gave! She managed to cut out 1,000 characters from my law personal statement! She also gave some great insights into how I could improve.
Thanks to Law Mind's Personal Statement check I managed to get invited to 4 interviews! They were very quick in their turnaround, and were able to address the areas I needed to edit.
I was surprised by how detailed Law Mind were in their feedback - they noticed things my head of sixth form didn’t. I liked the fact that I could Skype the tutor and discuss the edits through with her.
I had my law personal statement reviewed 4 times by Law Mind and they went above and beyond what I expected! They are a group of enthusiastic and professional teachers!
The feedback they gave was very constructive and helped me cut down words. They took extra care to make sure I understood the feedback they were giving, and implement it effectively.
I would highly recommend the Law Mind law personal statement review. They made sure they didn't just rewrite my personal statement but instead gave some real individual feedback!
I could not recommend this website more! I bought a law personal statement check from many companies but theirs was the best. They also responded within 24h before my UCAS deadline
I had a two hour 1-1 session with Alice who was so helpful in cutting down my Law personal statement. She helped me with my surgical work experience paragraph, which had a few lengthy sentences.
The Law personal statement check happened so quickly - I got it back instantly. I have no complaints at all! Speed was good - I got it back within 2 days. The analysis was detailed and clear to me.
At first I was reluctant as I was skeptical that it was cheaper than most providers. However, I was very happy! My editor, Shameena, spotted grammar mistakes and helped me cut my word count
If it wasn't for Law Mind, I would never have known how to write a law personal statement so well. They helped teach me how to make links between my work experience and my skills.
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Whether it’s a first, ninth or final draft, send us your personal statement. You can also tell us if you’d like us to focus on a particular aspect e.g. word count or work experience
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